Woah, twenty parts so far? That is so many!:D
Emma pushed past the guards and ran after her, her hair flying in the
night wind.
“Dee! Dee! Wait! Stop! Please, Jaclynn! Stop!” She shouted after
her, but she didn't even know if she could hear her. Jaclynn came to
the edge of the fjord and her foot touched the very edge of the
water, turning it into hard milky glaze. Jaclynn's eyes grew wide but
she heard the shouts of her friend drawing closer. She knew she had
to leave if she ever was to have freedom. She touched the fjord with
her shoe and it hardened instantly. She faced the forest of trees
ahead of her and sighed. She began to run on the water, glaze
hardening it each step she took. The glaze spread across the whole
fjord until it was completely hardened. Jaclynn struggled through the
forest and out of sight from the castle.
***
Emma and Cedric hurried back to the castle courtyard in a daze. Emma
walked with her head down and Cedric followed her trail. As they
entered the courtyard, the villagers were staring at the sky in awe
and horror. They held out their hands to the air and Emma noticed for
the first time that little rainbow specks were falling from the
clouds.
“Sprinkles?” A woman shouted.
“Yes, sprinkles!” Another replied. Emma raised her hand and a
pink sprinkle fell onto it.
“Did you know?” Cedric asked her. Staring at her hand, Emma shook
her head.
(ugh, big hand.XD) |
“No.” Emma couldn't believe it. Jaclynn had donut powers.
And they just had a terrible fight. Emma had to go after her. Her
pride was bruised, but she had to talk to her and fix it.
“Look! IT'S SNOWING! It's snowing with her evil power! The Queen
has cursed this land!” The Duke of Ice Creamtown shouted, then
turned to one of his cream colored body guards, “She must be
stopped, you have to go stop her!”
“Wait! No!” Emma exclaimed. The duke gasped as he whizzed around,
a blur of white against the dark courtyard.
“YOU!” He screamed, pointing at her, “Did she cast her
witchcraft power onto you, you have always been here every
summer....learning witchcraft, are you her apprentice?”
“No!” Emma shook her head, “I'm just a normal Cookie.”
The duke looked skeptical.
“Besides, Jaclynn's not a monster-”
“She practically killed me!” The duke cut in. Cedric raised a
finger.
“Uh, you only slipped,” He justified. The duke crossed his arms
and scowled.
“This is all a misunderstanding!” Emma stated, trying to calm
down the two irritated men, “I started the fight, so I am going to
go after her and set things right.”
Cedric's eyes widened and he touched her shoulder, “What?”
“Bring me a horse!” She ordered to a fretful servant. The servant
raced away to the stables.
“Emma, you can't! It's too dangerous!”
“She's not dangerous. I'll bring her back and everything will turn
out just fine.”
“I'm coming with you,” He remarked.
“No,” Emma replied, she didn't know why she didn't want him
coming, but she didn't, “Uh, I need you to stay here and watch over
her kingdom for me and keep an eye on the duke.”
“On my honor,” He said, bowing his head, but he remained frowning
at the thought of letting her go alone. The servant came back with a
chestnut colored horse that had white hair and Emma hopped up onto
the pink and cream saddle and clasped a cloak around her neck.
“I leave Prince Cedric in charge. I will be back,” Emma gazed
down at Cedric, “I promise.” He nodded and Emma felt her heart
flutter. He was so handsome. She smiled down at him, then kicked her
horse into a gallop out of the royal courtyard.
***
So, Emma is off on her journey and an especially scary thing is destined to happen soon...Something that didn't happen in the original Frozen...That's right! My story is only inspired by Frozen, not a carbon copy!XD
I hope you liked this part!:)
-Emma-
Great job! can't wait for the next part!!
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Delete-Emma-
YAY! GLAZED! I CAN NOT WAIT for the next part? What will happen?!?!?!?!?!?!? XD
ReplyDelete-Clara <3
Thanks!!:D I guess you'll just have to wait and find out...:)
Delete-Emma-
-faint-
ReplyDeleteLOL! Thanks!:)
Delete-Emma-
DID YOU JUST ALMOST GIVE ME A SPOLIER!?! AND MADE ME WAIT?!?! :D
ReplyDeleteWhenever you mention sprinkles it makes me think of my friends whose last name is sprinkle! :D
LOL! Yes, I did!:D Oh, that's so funny!:)
Delete-Emma-
I absolutely loved this part, Emma! The pic looks great!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!:)
Delete-Emma-
this is really cool!!!
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Delete-Emma-
Ooh! I'm so excited! Great job Emma! And a surprise? Exciting!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you!!:D
Delete-Emma-
I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
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Delete-Emma-
I LOVE this!
ReplyDeleteMisty
https://mistycreativewriting.wordpress.com/
Thank you, Misty!:D
Delete-Emma-
GLAAZZZEEEDDDD!!!! :O XD Are you going to do a "Let it Go" type of part? ;)
ReplyDelete~Jaclynn~
LOL! Well, I will be doing a "transformation" for you, but you won't sing!XD
Delete-Emma-
Awww, no singing? Poor me. LOLOL! JK! XD That would be hard and kind of awkward to write XD
Delete~Jaclynn~
LOL! I know, so sad.XD Yeah, I once read a book whose main character was a singer and the whole kingdom was made up of singers, so there were a ton of songs, but they all flowed and weren't weird!XD
Delete-Emma-
LOL! Oh wow! I don't know if I would like that or not... Maybe since they flowed well, I would, but the LOTR book killed me with all their poems, songs, and such. I was like - END ALREADY I WANT TO GET ON WITH THE STORY!!! XD
Delete~Jaclynn~
Yeah, you probably wouldn't care for it, but since it fits the story and people, it works!;)
Delete-Emma-
Such a good illustration! Can't wait for the next part! :D
ReplyDeleteLoved it!:D
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